Thursday, April 23, 2009

A Revision

Well, I revised my That's Absurd! paper and just wanted to get some feed back on which version everyone thought was better. Click here for the revised version and the original is just a couple posts down my blog. Oh, FYI, the only part I really changed was towards the end. Enjoy!

2 comments:

Sarah said...

I clicked on your link and it said I didn't have access to it.

Anonymous said...

We love the whole thing, please send it to one of the Church Pub. and see what happens. Love Grandpa and Grandma willis